Research question: What effects of divorce do children carry with them into adulthood?
Precise claim: Children carry the negative effects of their parents' divorce with them into adulthood.
Reasons/blue print:
1. the effects of divorce, including low self-esteem, mistrustfulness and fear of commitment, can stay with children for years.
2. more young adults from divorced families experience long term damage (serious social and emotional problems) compared to young people from intact families.
Complete thesis statement: Children carry the negative effects of their parents' divorce into adulthood.
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I think that you did a great job. Very short and to the point I like it.
ReplyDeleteI think you have good topic but your thesis statement may be a little vague and you might want to mention some of the negative effects that children carry with them into adulthood in your thesis.
ReplyDeleteLooks great!
ReplyDeleteThis sounds good if you where going for a more traditional thesis then you could include the aspects you plan to talk about.
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